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Isis
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0 posted 04-16-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

This weeks challenge is to tell me in poetic form, who and what your 'dream' life's partner would be like.
ie.
He'd have to have a sense of humour,
Always make me laugh,
But then when I need guidance,
I'd expect him to stand tough etc etc.
Anyone interested in giving it a go?
And we'll see if looks aren't important like everybody tends to say..  


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 04-17-2000 06:13 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Ok!! I have something to post here!!


I値l know when my love comes along.....
He値l look into my eyes and see into my heart.
He値l smile a special smile just for me,
We will always be together, never apart.
His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul,
I will melt into his soft and tender embrace.
My lips with his slender fingers he will trace,
So in love will we be.

The man of my dreams will never betray me,
His love for me will be so real.
I won稚 ever have to worry about being alone,
He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal.
His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy,
We will walk beneath the stars all night.
With him everything will seem so right.
So in love will we be.

I have never been in love before,
But I値l know when everlasting love comes along.
He will always be able to make me happy,
He will fill my heart with a beautiful song.
His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever,
We値l dance in the moonlight- dance all night.
Into my life he will bring dazzling light.
So in love will we be.

Forever and ever, till death do us part,
I値l love him with every bit of my heart.
So in love will we be.


That's it! I wrote it a while back but it seems to fit the challenge so I thought I might as well use it and then check out the alternative challenge.




 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
dhuron
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2 posted 04-17-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Oh isis,

I have a poem that I wrote about the encounter with my "dream partner"
It is called Engulfing fire, I'll Post it in Dark..

VVVBAS

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Isis
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3 posted 04-18-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

great stuff ESP!!
And Daniel, what is the total of the poem in Dark so I won't miss it?

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Isis
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4 posted 04-18-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

great stuff ESP!!
And Daniel, what is the total of the poem in Dark so I won't miss it?

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


5 posted 04-19-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks Isis! For a poet like you to compliment my poetry does indeed make me happy!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
dhuron
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6 posted 04-19-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Isis it is called Engufling Fire, written from the encounter with the perfect one.*LOL*


Hope ya like
kaile
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7 posted 04-20-2000 03:27 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Qualities of my Love(tanka)

Pleasant smile a must~
Positive outlook useful~
A mind of her own~
Willing to bear thick and thin~
My hundred percent woman!

my contribution here,Iris!     



[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 04-20-2000).]
kaile
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8 posted 04-20-2000 03:30 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

lovely poem from you..ESP...my best wishes in your quest for true love ")
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


9 posted 04-20-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks Kaile!...yours is terrific!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie  


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
PrincessPoet
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10 posted 04-21-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for PrincessPoet   Email PrincessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PrincessPoet

Okay, I'll accept the challenge hmmmm?

He Wasn't A Dream

There is someone
Who'll cause my mind to
Ramble through a cluttered archive
Of whats missing in my Life

The way he'll Look- at me
Changes my previous destination
From being Single & Free

The way he'll hold me- In those arms
I'll see what I'm missing
And, be sure of what I need

The way he'll kiss me
Will make me want to write Poetry
And, hold my breath to stop time

He'll cause me to Fantasize:
In the Sleepless hours of the night
About the things, I want him to do to me
Things that'll keep me longing for more

If I could only leave him the keys
That will open the door
To my Dreams and, we'll both be
In Ectasy- until the Morning

And, when I awoke
I found myself waking to
The end of the most realistic Dream
And, Yet a gentle red rose-
Beside me in bed

Realizing, That my Dream
Was not a Dream at all
When I saw the man of my Dreams
Entering the room
He was the all along
And, I knew...  I wasn't alone
Because, He Wasn't a Dream.


  


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet

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