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Serpentine Demon, challenge

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Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
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Angels Camp


0 posted 04-07-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

Rise up itís ugly head, all who see it will retreat
Itís s ferrous like strikes leaves
us  all in itís wake a total defeat.

Serpentine coils surround unbound emotions
taking advantage sliding upon heart felt lotions.

Demons beware and devils take care,
she is the motherís bane of all you hold dear
look her in the eye, show her you donít cry if you dare.

Itís gaping jaws this serpentine beast, that lays within us all
opens wide you canít hide your fears from itís grinding maw.

It slithers through creating holes bringing forth our hidden woeís
She doesnít care there is no snare to halt her taking of friend or foe.

Just pat her head and ask her to rest, this serpentine demon of ours
this is all we can ask, if at our best, within our tear stained showers.



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Isis
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1 posted 04-07-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Wonderful work Joel!  Glad to see you are making your way around the forums so quickly too!!  It's always so interesting to see where different challenges take different people!! Well done  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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