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songwater
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since 04-02-2000
Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.


0 posted 04-05-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for songwater   Email songwater   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for songwater

Stuck inside these four walls
A thosand years or more
Wont somebody come and rescue me?
It has been so long now I'm wondering what for
Won't somebody take these chains from me.
You can never tell,how deep,s the pits of hell,
Don't try to run and hide,the pain is deep inside.
Some will win,some will loose,but all of us will die
Demons come and Demons go,but a Hero only tries.
Win or loose,tie or draw.rainy skys or blue,
To call on God to win the war,
The hero inside is You....



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StarrGazer
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since 03-05-2000
Posts 696
Texas


1 posted 04-05-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

very well said songwater   nice poem

 Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~

Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


2 posted 04-06-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Welcome Songwater!!  And what a beautiful nickname you've chosen.  Sounds mystical to me!!  
This was lovely, well written, and I too love the saying , 'A Hero is a man who tries!'


 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
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Posts 1341
Angels Camp


3 posted 04-07-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

Well put Songwater, For so long I looked for a hero to save me
when all the time it was me.
Great work.
Joel.
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