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just_another_fe
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0 posted 03-31-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Sorry i'm a little late and sorry munda i know this aint the best but i couldnt really relate to the sentence i was given


At the corner church where angels harked
I met a man from who lived in Denmark.
He said he was only here for a little while.
I wanted him to stay longer, i liked his style.
He asked me if I'd like to go on a date
So I went out with and returned real late.
We had fun, it was a ball
We went to dinner, a movie and that aint all *wink*
I gave him my number, I hope he'll callwith any hpe he wont be leaving here at all.


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just_another_fe, I am so sorry I did not even think how my last line could be a problem to relate to, please forgive me it's just the way the poem I wrote led me. I think you did a fine job though with that sloppy ball I returned. I had a problem to with my line to start with cause I don't know that much about the knights and Wizards days so I had to bring it to my time...LOL
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lol its ok i guess all we can do is try thats the object of the game  
 
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