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wonderous
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since 02-29-2000
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0 posted 03-30-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for wonderous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wonderous

FOR MY GOD, MY COUNTRY AND MY LOVE
In that moment time stood still
Mists of the past parted to reveal
A bygone era, only a year, seemed more

In that moment time stood still
The laughter, the music, the hills
A bygone era, only a year, seemed more
His smiling face, his fiery eyes, his gentle touch

The laughter, the music, the hills
A chapel amidst the sunkissed greens
His smiling face, his fiery eyes, his gentle touch
Amidst His eternal presence we took our vows

A chapel amidst the sunkissed greens
In the distance the clouds rolled in
Amidst His eternal presence we took our vows
Far to the North, the dragon stormed the ground

In the distance the clouds rolled in
To the east the church lay in ruin
Far to the North, the dragon stormed the ground
The west was taken by the evil villian

To the east the church lay in ruin
To the south we fleed
The west was taken by the evil villian
My lover prepared for battle

To the south we fleed
In that moment time stood still
My lover prepared for battle
FOR MY GOD, MY COUNTRY AND MY LOVE

dhuron
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1 posted 03-30-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Great Backhand Wonderous...let's see what I can do

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

wonderous
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2 posted 03-30-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for wonderous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wonderous

thanx
but i personally liked my earlier phouton better
but i,m determined to try untill i master it
 
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