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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-03-27 09:04 PM


Ruler of My heart
come and fill
the emptiness
and ease the pain

Ruler Of my Soul
Rekindle my spark
Fill the empty bottle
Ignite the cold flame

Ruler of my heart
Fill my void
Show me happiness
and erase this sorrow.


well, what do you all think about my first post here?



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-29 12:46 PM


Simple yet wonderful Daniel, this was an easy challenge and you make it look like child's play.  As I said to other's responding to this challenge, it went many different ways, more than I even imagined.
Challenge well met  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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