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Sacrificial Lamb

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StarrGazer
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since 03-05-2000
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Texas


0 posted 03-24-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

You told me you would
never hurt me
and I believed your words
I had my doubts
but you laughed at them
making me feel guilty
after all, you said
that you love  me
so I abandoned my fears
I fell deep and hard
but reality returned
with a blast of cold air
you words were
just words
and my trust  
a sacrificial lamb


 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~


Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 03-26-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Wonderful StarGazer, all of you take these two words so many different ways!!  Challenge well and strongly met!!    Thanks

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


 
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