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Stephen Jones
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0 posted 03-21-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for Stephen Jones   Email Stephen Jones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stephen Jones

(There wasn't enough room for this in the reply box)
This is my response to Isis' (ruler of my heart) theme.

Ruler of My Heart

To be ruler of a province
and to conquer land and nation
there must be bravery untold
and stout determination.
High knowledge is required
to sieze his kingdom every part.
And yet I'll crown as deity
the ruler of my heart.
It takes a soul of highest skill
to swallow up the lands,
with shrewdest human wisdom
and dexterity of hands.
High graces must prevail
to reign through war or voice of art.
And yet the son of God must be
the ruler of my heart.


 
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-21-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is an excellent response to the challenge.
Isis
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2 posted 03-21-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Stephen, Bravo!!  You took this somewhere completely unexpected to me, spiritually. And that is beautiful to see, I too love and appreciate  his love in my heart and life.
Bravo and thanks for the wonderful surprise with this!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


dhuron
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3 posted 03-28-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Superb Job,

I loved how your met this challenge

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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