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dazed
Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA

0 posted 2000-03-16 09:50 AM


Ok I want some one to make me a poem
about the world how it has become and how we're distroying our home...for instance
we werent supposed to have cars, and computers and that stuff we were supposed to live off the land and that jive...I want someone to make me a poem about that...I prefer Poet DeVines style of writing
How he has words that rhyme and good rhythm ,
and the same amount of lines in each verse...
real picky arent I?? Thats the challenge

Dana



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RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
1 posted 2000-03-16 01:43 PM


Dazed: I'm not sure how to tell you this but PdV is female...LOL

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?


dazed
Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
2 posted 2000-03-16 04:00 PM


Rainbow girl what ever gave you the thought, I thought she was male cause I said I loved her work??
I knew she was female her name is sharon...I read her thing on here...
She writes good poems but thanx for telling me anyway!!  
LOL

dazed
Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
3 posted 2000-03-16 04:03 PM


WHOOPS MY BAD!!!  
I seen the mistake hehehehehe
sorry I was a little offended and couldnt understand why you thought that LOL
Missed the s hehehe LOL

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-03-18 07:50 PM


I'll leave it for PDV then, I'm sure she'll love to have a go!!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


ken
Junior Member
since 2000-03-10
Posts 49
RI
5 posted 2000-03-19 11:33 AM


Gazing up into the sky
I often ask the question why
With all the beauty the earth has given
With mans distruction, we are still forgiven
How long can progress continue to ruin
Everything the earth is doing
It feeds and shelters us from dusk til dawn
Allows our children to be born
With every generation experimenting more
One thing I know is sure
If we continued to live in the past
We wouldn't worry if our world would last

ken
( is this what you were looking for ? )  


Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-03-19 01:58 PM


Mother Earth

Everybody loves a mother
There’s no love of greater worth
But most of us do not respect
Or show a love for Mother Earth

We have all destroyed our planet
Some things, irreversible
The deeds of those who speak the loudest
Often are invisible

Each one makes a contribution
To the planet’s woeful ails
We never take the time to stop
And walk prevention’s harder trails

Deadly chemical pollution
Nuclear power’s accidents
Toxic drums are laid to rest
Landfill leaks are prevelent

But each household in the country
Spills pollution of its own
Discarding useless packaging
We fill the earth with styrofoam

We pour our solvents down the drain
We grow our grass on chemicals
And never once protest the waste
We leave that to the radicals

Every body loves a mother
That’s what Mom is all about
But no one loves our Mother Earth
For some odd reason, she’s left out

Elizabeth Santos

dazed
Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
7 posted 2000-03-19 02:36 PM


WOW both Ken and Elizabeth you two both did great!!! I tried so hard to think of a poem for this cause this topic interests me and saddens me also and I couldnt ever put it in words even though im not that bad at writing poetry... I just didnt know how to word it!!
Ya guys both did what I wanted and thanx they are both sad and beautiful poems!! except i would still rather turn back time even though we might not know as much...We probably werent put here to discover the things we did

Thanx again you 2
Dana        

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