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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2000-01-28 04:55 PM


Challenge:  Must have the line as follows  

Watching you smile makes my life worthwhile

Ok folks, do *your* best!!!!

HUGS

ps: I want the most romantic or saddest poems you can think of, I want to know what there is about a smile that gives you that umphhhhhh or makes your stomach turn over or maybe it's a smile from your past that you can't forget...

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 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-28-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-28 06:23 PM


I know that certain *smile* that I want to write about......now, just to come up with the words!! I'll try my best for you Cindy!!

Denise

White Wolf
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2 posted 2000-01-28 07:51 PM


I will see what I can come up with.  I have a smile in mind but am not sure about the words yet.  Let you know what I get it done.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-01-29 02:56 PM


I'm on it!
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-30 03:20 PM


I just posted mine in Open, Cindy! Hope you like it!

Denise

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 2000-01-30 04:50 PM


Sharon and Denise: Such a different style from both of you and both made me take a deep breath...beautiful...thanks for responding..

HUSG

SD: I look forward to it..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...

White Wolf
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6 posted 2000-02-02 03:00 AM


Not quite what I would of wanted but it is up there in OP#5.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."


RainbowGirl
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7 posted 2000-02-02 07:10 AM


SD: Seen and replied, well done and thanks for taking part..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...

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