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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 2000-01-13 03:09 PM


I need a GOOD challenge, ok so any challenege will do but I need one, or more, any ideas anyone?!?!?!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste.  Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~




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Saxoness
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1 posted 2000-01-15 11:28 PM


I had this dream the other night...I don't remember what it was about...except that i was crying my heart out, I mean really sobbing. So, my challenge is to write a poem with the line or theme "crying in my sleep"
Hows that?


 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Trevor
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2 posted 2000-01-17 08:46 PM


A good challenge...mmmm...how about making world peace happen?   Or perhaps build a life size replica of the Eiffel Tower out of marshmellows? .....sorry, couldn't resist...
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 2000-01-20 06:34 PM


Saxoness, as you already know I already posted the poem, thanks for the challenge, got any more?

Trevor, haha a life size replica of the Eiffel Tower out of marshmellows, hmmm, that could be fun LoL, though it would NEVER really happen hehe

Anyone else?

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Saxoness
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4 posted 2000-01-21 03:25 AM


Hmmmm...Recently I recieved an email from my sister that included a mind blowing picture. It was a story about a pregnant mother who's child had spina bifida. The child would die unless he recieved a new type of surgery in which the doctor would operate while he was still inside the womb. Well, the doctor performed a C-section and made a small incision in the womb...and right before he began to operate...that small 21 week old baby stuck his perfectly formed hand out and grasped the doctors finger. A picture was taken at that moment...and it came out perfectly clear. It was the most breathtaking thing I've ever seen.
So, Echo, my challenge is to write a poem...from the perspective of the doctor in that very moment. Happy writing!


 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 2000-01-21 03:37 AM


I sent you an ICQ message on this a little, still haeva  few more questions though =)....

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Saxoness
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6 posted 2000-01-21 06:46 PM


hey there......you might want to email me instead....that icq  is an incorrect one.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Trevor
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7 posted 2000-01-22 12:02 PM


How about a pack of sea otters on the moon writing Haikus about missing Spring time in California.....or if ya want a real challenge, go out and find me an honest politician   "ba-dum-bump!"....snare hit for an failing comedian  
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 2000-01-22 07:23 AM


Ok Saxoness, I got the poem done, its in OP5 "Magical Moment"  Didn't come out like I wanted but hey nothign I write does LoL  Any more challenges?

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Saxoness
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9 posted 2000-01-22 02:59 PM


Hmmm.....*wracking my brain*  How about this.

How about a dream poem? Dream poems are often made up of words nouns...verbs....adjectives...that make no sense when put together, but when formatted into a poem, ends up with some sort of theme or moral at the end.
*Example*  twirling on tiny tilted toes while the dolls are silently clapping.
This could show a young girl dancing around her room while her dolls are her imagined audience.
So, my challenge is to write a dream poem with a hot bubble bath as the subject. Good luck!

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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