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Wand-Waving Mastress
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ERICO99 New Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 3Manteca,Ca. San Jouaquin |
Mysterious Beclouded behind a black dress Black flowing hair...brazen down Beware of this mastress age and spirit renown Obvious...insolence Heavily endowed And you wondered when... You were taken in By this wand-waving woman Bellbook and sound You wanted her Ooh, to touch her Thought you might swim in the passion That raged on in her soul Yes it raged with a suffering flow And so slow...befooled you followed Under a haunting spell untold Out of control...impossible to handle Deviated to go with a wand-waving mastress Bellbook and candle Obvious...insolence And a cast of a silent madstone The enchantress had you with dangerous intentions...then, still unknown And there was nothing...noone could do As this wand-waving witch allured you As she seemingly haunted you down You were captured with those spells of hers ...bellbook and sound Intence...insolence Beware if a mastress comes mysterious Beclouded behind her black dress Intense Enchantress...heavily endowed Watch out she's a wand-waving woman And she'll have you... Have you bellbook and sound She'll have you bellbook and sound |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
like this, think it should be in open poetry, instead of here, but it paints a vivid picture  |
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JesiKa raBBit Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 11midland Texas USA |
yeah I like this one too. It does paint a nice clear picture and it flows together real nice like. |
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