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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is a challenge that was presented to me a while back by a friend. I believe it originally appeared in Writers Digest. Write the first line. The last word in that line must be used as the first word in the next line, and so on. Sounds simple, right? Wait! The last word of the last line must be the same as the FIRST word in the first line. This was my response: Joy Joy, the sound of glass touching Touching each other they smile Smile over small pools of champagne Champagne bubbles toast a new life Life together, intertwined and linked Linked arms raise the glasses to lips Lips kiss, eyes close in dreams of tomorrows Tomorrows paint scenes of pastel love Love floods two joined hearts Hearts promise forever Forever is today Today is joy caroline  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 09-01-99).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
well you you did did better better then then I I could could...well. haha sorry. I dont think I could top the poem you wrote. Good Job!!! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
*LOL*!!  Come on now Lucie! It took me a couple of days to come up with something I really liked...keep at it! It will come to you.------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
this poem doesnt have the exact words but the basesd of them,,,,,,,hope you like it all the same Earwigs They march in Invade my home Homeless insects Insecticide acid Acid hate Hateful they rant Rancid meat Meat eating plants Plant evil seeds Seedlings grow Growth of death Dealy poison Poisonous snakes Snaking along, to my bed Bed time Time to die Die in the dark Darkness will make you blind Blindness is bliss Blissful I die Die like them...... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Its great! Unusual, too. A little darker than mine (just a little..*LOL*!!!) Good job. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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