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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
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Springfield, Massachusetts U.S


0 posted 08-13-99 02:15 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Jackal

its beating on my mind again,
where is the hollow friend,
i want that craving,
makes me feel small,
thrown around someones rag doll,
but im in heaven,
hell's release,
no more chains,no more leash,
i can breathe,and im alive,
nothing kicking me inside,
the power of love,
has found me dead




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pandora
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since 07-26-99
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1 posted 08-13-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

hijack--- heheh---- this is a really cool poem and it says alot and it's written really well... could you go post it in Open Poetry forum for others to read??? Pretty please?

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