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JohnDoe82
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0 posted 08-05-99 06:18 PM       View Profile for JohnDoe82   Email JohnDoe82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JohnDoe82

(Title should go here!)

The skies above are strange and great,
Her wonders I can see,
For when it's dark her stars shine down,
And glad my soul can be.

Her sun brings warmth to all the land,
And warms my heart as well,
Her moon, while cold, doth bring me light,
And leads me from my hell.

Her clouds bring shade unto my back,
Her rain, it fills the seas,
Her snow is soft and gently falls,
And puts my mind at ease.

Too much of one can bring me death,
Too few, my fate's the same,
I can't control the skies above,
Or learn to play its game.

Control is gone, but hope is not,
I must accept her will,
For if I weather this strong storm,
I'll learn to love her still.



[This message has been edited by JohnDoe82 (edited 08-06-99).]
Sweet T
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1 posted 08-06-99 12:10 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

I am a junior poet, and I would suggest
"Unconditional Love"
Hope this helps you.
Very well written.


could I show you love you have not seen?
lol Sweet T
JohnDoe82
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2 posted 08-06-99 05:30 PM       View Profile for JohnDoe82   Email JohnDoe82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JohnDoe82

I love it, thanks.
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3 posted 08-07-99 03:41 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

I might be too late, but I had a thought too.. "Mother Nature"

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LngJhnAg
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4 posted 08-07-99 10:39 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

John

I kinda like the short sweet titles that make the reader conclude the theme of the poem. Since you mention the stars, the sun, the moon, clouds, the weather, and the difficulty in controlling any of those things, it seems to me "Skies" might work well.

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redwriter1
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5 posted 08-07-99 01:03 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

how about..
"Love Storm".. ?
ShellBelle
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6 posted 08-09-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for ShellBelle   Email ShellBelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShellBelle

"Heaven on Earth" ?

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Tara Simms
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i like the Heaven on Earth the best.
 
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