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Mystic
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0 posted 07-29-99 07:19 PM       View Profile for Mystic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic

Ok, here's the problem. I'm trying to write a song on my guitar. I love poetry, so I want to make a song out of one. Here's what I have so far:

Chances are I'm dreaming,
but I've got nothing to lose.
There's no doubt I love you,
but it's too hard to choose.

A life of fame and fortune,
or a life with you.
In time, I hope I'll know what's right,
if my heart stays true.

So will you love me?
Or am I just another girl.
Do you really care for me?
Or are we in 2 different worlds.

There's so much more out there,
instead of this longshot love.
But can I really walk away,
from the one I'm dreaming of?

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O.k. that's all. A little help? Please?!



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Sunshine
Mystic
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since 07-22-99
Posts 13


1 posted 07-30-99 11:49 AM       View Profile for Mystic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic

Help!!!
Craig
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since 06-10-99
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2 posted 07-31-99 03:54 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig



Song writing? If Iím as bad at this as I am at poetry weíve got serious problems but here goes nothing

Chance is that Iím dreaming
But I've got nothing left to lose
I guess I know I love you
But youíre making it hard to choose
This life of fame and fortune
Is a life without you
In time I will believe
What my heart believes
could make these feelings true


Will you really love me
Will you take me to your heart
will you really love me
or will you tear my world apart
Iíve got to know the answers
to questions in my mind
do you really love me
or is it just a waste of time

Am I just another girl
And do you really care for me
Are we in 2 different worlds
Or is there more to this you see
Is this such a long shot
Can I really walk away
Or will you take a chance
With this one romance
I need to hear you say

Will you really love me
Will you take me to your heart
Will you really love me
Or will you tear my world apart
Iíve got to know the answers
To questions in my mind
Do you really love me
Or is it just a waste of time

.....and so on
Mystic
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since 07-22-99
Posts 13


3 posted 07-31-99 08:04 PM       View Profile for Mystic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic

Yay! Someone finally answered! Good idea! I like it. Thanks bunches Craig.

P.S. I really like your poetry!
Craig
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since 06-10-99
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4 posted 08-01-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Liking my poetry says very little about your taste ( if you don't tell anybody I won't )

I was glad to assist
Cobra
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since 07-27-99
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5 posted 08-01-99 12:42 AM       View Profile for Cobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cobra

Well! The nerve! I do so have taste. Good enough taste to read your lovely grrr.. ugly writing! Nyah! Nyah!

P.S. I won't tell...
Mystic
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since 07-22-99
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6 posted 08-01-99 12:44 AM       View Profile for Mystic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic

Ooops! I unraveled my other identity! I am Cobra! Shhh! Don't tell... Ok. It's my sister's username,but don't tell her I know her password.
 
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