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redwriter1
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0 posted 07-22-99 09:13 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

famous country saying..

How can I miss you , when you won't leave?

but think of it as.. she won't leave his thoughts or mind...

how do I make this more of a love song
instead of an insult??

I'm not kidding i really wanna write this song...

throw me a bone... please.. (grin)
thanks xoxoxo
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1 posted 07-23-99 07:08 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How can I miss you?
Leave you behind
When you won't even
Leave my mind?

How can I feel you
Go away
When, in my heart,
You're here to stay?

I don't know where you'll go to
If you should ever leave
But there will be no call for me
To sit at home and grieve

For how could I ever miss you
Wherever you may be?
For, in my mind, I'll always find
You deep inside of me.
redwriter1
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2 posted 07-27-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

exactly!!.. that's what I mean!.. thankyou very much....

need to write some more.. ( i mean, I need to write some more).. sounding.. mm..
desparately trying to get someone out of your mind.. but they just ...
stick there.. and haunt you..

hard one i know... but thank you for the help.. it's truly appreciated..

nice lines...
willl post updates...

xoxoox Red
 
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