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pookie
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0 posted 06-25-99 03:50 AM       View Profile for pookie   Email pookie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pookie

I am going crazy here. I can't say I love you without sounding like I'm just sucking up.
Everything seems wrong!!! AH!
Help!

*I feel your touch in sleep,
Awake,
At the strangest moments,
Is this forever?
Or just a moment?.....

Is that a good start? What does everyone think? Suggestions?
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1 posted 06-25-99 12:11 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I think it's a good start, and I'll try to post some lines later-but I have to run now, keep up the effort...
*Elizabeth*
Enotneicna
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2 posted 06-29-99 02:37 PM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna

That is a very good start!

Here is a poem I wrote for my halfside....I have to reply with an example.....k?


"Through the Times We've Shared"

Time has passed through the times we've shared.
Whispered in our ears and our hearts,
Emptied ourselves and refilled us to overflowing.

No, our lives have not been perfect.
There have been cross words and bitter tears,
But through it all our love endured.

Time has passed through the times we've shared.
Healed the broken hearts, renewed the shattered dreams.
Endured the bad times, enjoyed the good times.

Yes, time has passed through the times we've shared.
Evolved from friendship to love, aspiring to heights undreamed.
Remembered, relived, reloved and made strong,
Surviving time through the times we've shared.

------------------
Sharon Lee Rotondi
(Enotneicna)
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tori
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3 posted 07-09-99 05:01 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Sometimes if its tough its better in a dream we all have some crazy dreams.

"In Dreams they Come"

Come to me in sweetness
With you I am complet
So wondrful you are for me
If three little words I could utter
Forever we would share
Oh why is the words so hard to say
When people say it everyday

I feel the passion in my soul
Why then do they take control
My lips can't make a verble sound
Everytime that your around
My heart beats like a big bass drum
When in the room you come
So why then is it hard to say
When people say it everyday

Oh how I wish that they would come
As every day I think of only one
And every second of every night
In dreams I love and hold you tight
So my darling, my true one,
It is in slumbered dreams they come
Tho it grows stronger everyday
I love you, in dreams I say

?? just a thought

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