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HOW TO SAY I LOVE YOU???eek!
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pookie New Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 6Arnold MO USA |
I am going crazy here. I can't say I love you without sounding like I'm just sucking up. Everything seems wrong!!! AH! Help! *I feel your touch in sleep, Awake, At the strangest moments, Is this forever? Or just a moment?..... Is that a good start? What does everyone think? Suggestions? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I think it's a good start, and I'll try to post some lines later-but I have to run now, keep up the effort... *Elizabeth* |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
That is a very good start! Here is a poem I wrote for my halfside....I have to reply with an example.....k? "Through the Times We've Shared" Time has passed through the times we've shared. Whispered in our ears and our hearts, Emptied ourselves and refilled us to overflowing. No, our lives have not been perfect. There have been cross words and bitter tears, But through it all our love endured. Time has passed through the times we've shared. Healed the broken hearts, renewed the shattered dreams. Endured the bad times, enjoyed the good times. Yes, time has passed through the times we've shared. Evolved from friendship to love, aspiring to heights undreamed. Remembered, relived, reloved and made strong, Surviving time through the times we've shared. ------------------ Sharon Lee Rotondi (Enotneicna) http://members.rosenet.net/wtw/ [This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 06-29-99).] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sometimes if its tough its better in a dream we all have some crazy dreams. "In Dreams they Come" Come to me in sweetness With you I am complet So wondrful you are for me If three little words I could utter Forever we would share Oh why is the words so hard to say When people say it everyday I feel the passion in my soul Why then do they take control My lips can't make a verble sound Everytime that your around My heart beats like a big bass drum When in the room you come So why then is it hard to say When people say it everyday Oh how I wish that they would come As every day I think of only one And every second of every night In dreams I love and hold you tight So my darling, my true one, It is in slumbered dreams they come Tho it grows stronger everyday I love you, in dreams I say ?? just a thought |
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