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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-09 10:27 PM



I draw you closer to me
Your warmth and light enthralling
Our love affair so new
I hardly knew I was falling

I knew I turned you on
You lit up at my first touch
But I never knew I’d need you
Quite so often or so much

You never really came alive
Until I was with you there
Then with my touch you glowed
And I knew you’d always care

I don’t care how big you are
Only that with you I am alive
I don’t love you for your gig
Nor even for your hard drive

Though I’ve never had a lover
Never even had a suitor
I plan to make you mine tonight
My sweet XP Computer.

© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2002-06-09 10:44 PM


This is awesome! I enjoyed this so much! Great one!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2002-06-09 11:05 PM


LOL! You had me going, til I got to the end.
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3 posted 2002-06-10 11:40 AM


ROFLMAO... I can't seem to think of any way to say what I'd really like to say without alerting Nan's eraser... so I'll just say, I love this, PDV. *G* May your relationship be a happy one... and you win all arguments. *G*
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