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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-06-09 02:16 PM


In the universe within our minds
Lays the space to fulfill our destiny
So special is this place
No one may enter
For the boundary lies
In God’s will of individuality

In the imaginations that fly free to explore
We create our own worlds to escape into
Creating barriers that float into our thinking
But exist in the faith in us to succeed
Conquering all in solemn sleep

Yet the nightmares of real life
Penetrate the depth of this inner solitude
Terrorizing the will to carry on
But spells cast in desperation
Foster the impressions needed
To float on

As we leave the inner sanctity
To combat realism
In a physically abusive world
We balance our two spheres
In the dynamics of our personality

If the balance falters
Then we list to one side
Depressed in that state
Taking too much control
So we ride the roller coaster
Back to the middle ground
In a never ending battle

As both universes merge
In the colossal bouquet
An aroma sweats from the existence
In the texture to fantasize
The purpose of our travels
To bend the time machine

For time it seems may be different
In the two horizons
But the finally sand that flows
Will merge together
To blow out the candle of both

So create in both spheres
In the power that God wills
Create words that will carry beyond us
Into billions of inner worlds
And the world that unites them all
In the reality of sharing such a dream
In such a special moment
The image is reflected on forever


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D.Lester Young (05/09/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-06-09 02:26 PM


So create in both spheres
In the power that God wills
Create words that will carry beyond us
Into billions of inner worlds
And the world that unites them all
In the reality of sharing such a dream
In such a special moment
The image is reflected on forever

The symbolism in this verse let alone the whole poems i have to say is amazing.  thx for sharing.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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