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Heavy Rain
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Heavy Rain |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Heavy Rain the heavy rain so greatly needed has pulled and weighted me just as the blades of grass bend down in hefty drips that cling the weight of it is pulling me quite nearly to the ground how can I allow such power of pull to laden my spirit so why can I not just quell with song of praise to God above for in my heart and in my soul I know Who holds the key my future’s full secure in Him there’s nothing up to me ©June 9, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Virginia...I like the ways this can be read.....Nice work and presentation! |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I like very cute and fun to read. -neala |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very nice and I love the way you present the rain. - Julie Cold hands means a warm heart |
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