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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2002-06-09 02:04 AM



Mention to life
love
Mention to life
Soul
Mention to life
All
Mention to life
The unmetionable
Mention to life
That you Care
Mention to life
You'll always be there


Life is not living
Life is a being
Life is a noun
In which you prey

Mix up what is truly real
is it really happening
Am I really here?
Is this a solid state of mind
a weary dream
an act of god

Let me stand
infront of you
judge me for who I am
What I am
Who I am
and what I shall be



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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-06-09 02:35 AM


Kellie,
That's a pretty courageous decision. And judging by what I see...Awesome possibilities!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-09 02:54 AM


Loved this. Glad y' shared it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

TaureauRouge
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3 posted 2002-06-09 03:00 AM


I liked this intrinsic poem.  The poem really has a philosophical spin to it that creates a proper mindset.  Very good here


Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 2003-07-13 04:15 AM


I remember writing this... how extremely fed up I was. and all the sleepless nights prior.
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