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Open Poetry #20

Hero

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 09:53 PM

I felt like I was dying.
My Hero pulled me from deaths door.
I felt like I had no friends.
My Hero proved me wrong.
I felt like I was never gonna be loved.
My Hero loved me.
I felt like I had no life.
But My Hero came along and saved me.

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I have some of my poetry in Dark Poetry and Critical Analysis forums if you want to read more.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2002-06-08 10:14 PM

This is just as awesome! Great write here!

I am looking forward to reading more of yours.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-06-10 05:12 PM

This is short, but it says a lot. I like it.

Nan

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