»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #20
»
Rain
| Open Poetry #20 |
|
Rain |
|
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
|
Rain Rain Rain Pouring down Dreary rain coming down Makes me want to frown Why must it rain Rain makes me want to cry It makes me want to die Rain Rain Rain Pouring down Rain Rain Rain Go away Never come back another day Rain stop Before I want to drop away from this cruel world Rain Rain Rain Just go away Rain Rain Rain Pouring down |
||
| © Copyright 2002 the_loner_23 - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
awww... come now... it surely can't be that bad? Rainy days are wonderful for curling up with a book or watching movies or cooking something delicious or spending time with someone you love, playing games with kids, training the dog to do tricks, surprising a friend with a letter... ok I'm babbling  Nice piece to show your misery at the rain. We've been in a drought so long and now that we are getting several days in a row of rain, we are celebrating! So cheer up, throw a rain party - I'm such a girl - when it gets like this I lounge on the couch and paint my fingernails and toenails - and make sure something yummy is cooking in the oven. Hope you feel better about the weather soon! ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
||
|
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome to Passions, Loner... I happen to love the rain....but I also loved your poem.  ~ welcoming hugsLyra |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You definitely must not live in Arizona! We haven't had much rain at all for the last couple of years. I enjoyed the sing-song quality of your poem. Welcome to our humble home!  |
||
|
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
In my country it happens to rains a lot, but it teaches one to keep smiling.  Did you realize your poem has a song in it? It almost automatically makes me hum. Well done and welcome to Passions. |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I find I can write more when it's raining.. I'll be looking forward to more of your writing. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello and welcome to Passions A very sad but well written first piece and I'll look forward to reading more from you. Take care......Sue Suetang |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello the Loner...a lot of us have been in your shoes...a sad first post, I hope to see all sides of you as you practice your writing on us... Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Get out the umbrella and shuck off the shoes and dance to the raindrops.... Welcome to Passions... |
||
|
baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I really enjoyed this one, i hope to see more post from you. There's a peace inside us all |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi,welcome, and thanks for reading one of my poems Ilike this poem, I always feel like the rain is a heavenly showing of tears, so it makes me sad. Sandra |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Julie, this is such a sad but wonderful debut, sweet friend, here you will always find sunshine when you need it the most for we share these kind of days with you! I LOVE IT!!! HAPPY FATHERS DAY!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Julie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*splash splash* She said burn ... together. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
