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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-08 03:16 PM



Seductive Adorn

~*Marge Tindal*~

When the sun gallops down the mountain
caressing the forest in seductive adorn
You just have to give praise
for the beautiful rays
He so softly lays
on your morn
~*~

When sunlit jewels play in dewing spray
across the valley and into the lea
It's time for reflecting
and genuflecting
Sweet adoration
of appreciation
dawning on
this day
~*~

When the light dances over the water
on tippy-toeing ripples undulating
You simply have to take pause
in soft exhale of awe
for the day-canvas
the Master
is painting
~*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-08 03:19 PM


Marge,
Pictures and writing, lovely.

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-06-08 05:20 PM


This is lovely, Marge...
Are you the photographer here?

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-06-08 06:12 PM


Very beautiful, Marge! Love the photographs, too - as pretty as the poetry, they are.

We've had day after day of rain here, but believe me, we are on our knees in thanks that it has finally come down!  My flowers are loving it and so is my electric bill *LOL*

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

ethome
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4 posted 2002-06-08 06:39 PM


That's so right Marge...."The day canvas the master is painting" Leave it to you to come up with such a unique line.....I love some of those day canvases he paints. Makes you feel good to be alive! Beautiful pictures and words in this piece.
Thanks Marge!

Munda
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5 posted 2002-06-08 07:33 PM


What a beautiful combination of photograhy and poetry.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-06-08 07:44 PM


Like this Marge...James
Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-06-08 07:51 PM



Thanks for the E on this, Marge!

Krissy
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8 posted 2002-06-08 08:16 PM


Auntie Margie girl again your writing fills me with awe, it’s incredibly well written and so picturesque. You certainly have an incredible talent for sprinkling these blue pages with diamonds and star-studded delights.

You see I’m spending way too much time with my mother I’m beginning to sound like her now, this really is something special and I love it too. Thank you for placing this here it is perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-06-08 09:33 PM


Seymour~
You're a sweetie-pie~

Lyra~
I appreciate knowing you like it.
I'm just the word-ographer ... God is the choreographer
and Ron Carnell has the photographs on the Passions Card Site ...~
We kind of had to team up for this one~

IceQueen~
Lovely sharing ... thank you~
AND - did I mention before how much I like your signature ???

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes
I do !

ETHome~
It is uniquely His masterpiece~
Thanks dear friend~

Munda~
Thank you so much ....
God painted the day, I just inked it a little~

JamesMichael~
Always pleased to see you dear~

Karilea~
... anytime dear lady~

Krissy~

LOL -
'You see I’m spending way too much time with my mother I’m beginning to sound like her now'
Utterly, utterly true ~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

SmartChick
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10 posted 2002-06-08 10:58 PM


Beauitful Marge! Both, pictures and poetry.
the_loner_23
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11 posted 2002-06-08 11:00 PM


Everything from the write to the pictures were beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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SuzieQ~
Always I thank you for your replies and your friendship~

Julie~
Thank you for letting me know you've enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-06-09 11:58 AM


Marge:  This is a perfect beginning to Sunday morning.  Praising our Creator for the wonders of his work.  Just gorgeous!

Betty Lou Hebert

Verve
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14 posted 2002-06-09 12:10 PM




I am seduced ....

An enchanting piece ...

I really enjoyed the read.

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15 posted 2002-06-09 01:12 PM


Gorgeous in all ways.
Sandra

Marge Tindal
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BettyLou~
Yes ... and every other day of the week too !
You're a dear, dear friend ... thank you~

Verve~
Thank you so very, very much for the clever play on words~

CatalinaMoon~
Love the sharing with you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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