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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-08 02:41 PM


When only dreams are all to see
in slumber hues of white and blue
from mountain high to raging sea
beneath the light of crimson true

A love of one felt strong by two
in bond of heart’s blood raging in
Whispers of the dawn awake anew
Soft echo of passion therein

Beyond the rocks of crashing wave
upon the hill of shortened green
where hearts are one in freedom gave
among the spray of watery sheen

Dance then to song ‘gainst softest light
before the glow of yon round moon
Lightly prancing a soulful sight
as one the kiss does bring to swoon

Till ‘gain the orb of nightly shine
does bring to hill the dance of two
one heart shalt be a gift to thine
whence love does fall at drip of dew

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-06-08 03:20 PM


In the motion of the rocking waves. Loved the final line. The ribbon 'round the gift.
ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-06-08 03:36 PM


Magnus,
A very nice write. Enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2002-06-08 09:55 PM


Ah, another sigh filled poem.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-06-09 02:24 PM


Like this Magnus...James
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5 posted 2002-06-09 07:40 PM


Magnus darling boy How do you do this? You keep writing such perfect poetic wonders that fill my soul with such sweetness? I feel your writing in the deepest part of my soul darling boy and it’s as always magical.

You know I’m going to say that I love this utterly, outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utter delight. I’m awed by you time after time

Darling heart your writing is always something incredibly special, this is stunning utterly utterly stunning.

I missed you yesterday, in my minds eye I knew there was beauty I was just didn’t have the time to reach out for it. So tonight I’ll have to sup at your mind of find and drink your think. You do know I utterly utterly love this don’t you? Mmmmmm you are as always splendiferous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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6 posted 2002-06-09 09:04 PM



Seems to me you've got a few colors
going on for you as well, Magnus...
a satisfying, soulful write, this...

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-06-09 10:58 PM


Hello Barry

Once again you carry me away with your masterful words of love and romance.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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8 posted 2002-06-10 02:02 PM


Hi Barry,
Sorry I'm playing catch-up here...
a busy few days...
just found this beauty!
This is wonderful!
~Hugs & Sighs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2002-06-10 09:56 PM


*sigh* You're so talented. Keep 'em coming!
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10 posted 2002-06-12 01:43 PM


This is so beautiful--I love this one!
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