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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-06-08 10:59 AM



Butterfly


Living paper wings
Tumbling down to earth
Stilled by a fragrance


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (06-08-2002 11:00 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-08 11:08 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I just lve butterflies when they find a flower to happily rest on, they look sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-06-08 11:10 AM


flying to be free
fragile wings of beckoning
my heart flutters still




Butterflies are meant to be free


VAS
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3 posted 2002-06-08 11:15 AM


had to come in
love butterflies
love your "living paper wings"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2002-06-08 01:57 PM


Very nice Elizabeth!
I love Janet's reply too!
You two are just too cool!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-06-08 02:00 PM


Elizabeth,
A touching write, Sy

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-06-08 05:29 PM


Oh how beautiful, Liz
I love butterflies...but then...who doesn't?

~ butterfly hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-06-08 06:15 PM



This is what you made me see and I thank you.

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

LORNA
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8 posted 2002-06-08 06:37 PM


BUTTERFLY, BUTTERFUL,
PLEASE SPREAD YOUR WINGS,
DANCE WITH THE FLOWERS
AND BIRDS THAT SING.

LIKE A SHOOTING STAR,
SO BEAUTIFUL, SHALL DIE,
PLEASE SPREAD YOUR WINGS,
AND FLY FLY FLY.......


I LOVED YOUR POETRY SO MUCH I HAD TO CONTRIBUTE THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION!!!!!!!

YOU CANT LOSE WAT YOU NEVER HAD!!!!

[This message has been edited by LORNA (06-08-2002 06:40 PM).]

Severn
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9 posted 2002-06-08 07:21 PM




Beautiful Lizzy..possessing a butterfly's heart - this is special..

miss you, huggles

K

Munda
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10 posted 2002-06-08 07:31 PM


Great write Liz. Loved it.
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
11 posted 2002-06-08 07:32 PM


Hello Elizabeth

You never cease to amaze me with the sheer beauty of your words.  This was exceptional.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
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12 posted 2002-06-08 07:36 PM


oooohhhh what a yummy write this is... you do everything so beautifully.

You must be part butterfly, Elizabeth
Whenever I read your poetry, I always end up with an "ahhhhhhhhhh" sigh because it is so lovely, just like butterflies.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Elizabeth Santos
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Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
13 posted 2002-06-08 09:38 PM


Noah, I didn'r know you were a butterfly man. Always enjoy your comments

JM. Your resonse is an echo of sorts, very beautiful

Vas. THank you so much for your comment

Ethome,Thank you,dear Friend,

Icequeen Thabk you,, Your message is very kind

Lorna, Thak fot rsponding in verse, I Love it!!

Severn. I miss you girl!!!!! Hope all is well,Thanks for your remarks on this poem

Sy, Thank you, dear master

Madame Chipmonk, Butterfies are creatures stat still mystfy. Thank fot your kind words

Mysteria Thank you for sending me this beautiful butterfly

Munda Thank youm dear


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