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EarthenSoul
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WA, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 12:31 PM


Songbirds singing
of their love
Love of music
Love of living

Dandelions smile
their golden grins
Smile at the sun
Smile at the day

Butterflies dance
their rainbow ballet
Dance on flower
Dance on breeze

I walk slowly
stop to look
Look at nature
Look at living

I sit softly
pause to listen
Listen to nature
Listen to living

I think clearly
learning
Learning from nature
Learning how to live

© Copyright 2002 Trisha L. Beaver - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-06-08 02:45 AM


Hi Trisha, this is a very nice poem. Especially the part about butterflies. I love butterflies, they are so beautiful and peaceful.
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2002-06-08 02:47 AM


the pace of this was awesome and well achieved
ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-08 04:00 AM


I think this is a lesson everyone could take to heart.....very very nice work!
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