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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-06-07 10:19 PM

Am I crazy?
I think I am
I took him back
Once again.

Why did I do it?
It's hard to say
It's hard to keep
This feeling at bay.

Things are different
Very much so
But once again
I'll give it a go.

If he wants me
He'll work for me
If he loves me
He won't let me be...

until I am his;
But now he may choose
To leave me after all
Those lessons I've learned
Are things I'll never loose.

He apologised in the most beautiful way
With the words of a poet
That caused me to say
"I'll take you back, just remember one thing,
this time I won't let you play me like a string."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-06-07 10:26 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Rhonda, you go, always follow your heart, for love is meant to keep a friendship and if one can't contribute, your heart can't be touched! (sigh) This is powerfully sincere, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

rubberband
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 26
Will be half Swiss one day

2 posted 2002-06-07 11:01 PM

That is great. I am happy for you both. But I will still worry about you two. I don't want to see neither of you hurt.

My worst enemy is myself!

rubberband
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 26
Will be half Swiss one day

3 posted 2002-06-07 11:06 PM

So in otherwords:

"GO RHONDA, GO ANDREW!" Whoosh!

My worst enemy is myself!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-06-07 11:11 PM

Love is meant to numb our minds so our hearts can listen. Best wishes. Enjoyed your work. ThisDiamond

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-06-08 12:14 PM

Wish you the best, I hope it works.....and never let them "own" the string...

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-06-08 12:21 PM

If he wants me
He'll work for me
If he loves me
He won't let me be...

Wise words indeed, Rhonda...
and also a beautiful poem.

~ wishing you luck hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

7 posted 2002-06-08 12:36 PM

Poetic words to melt a poetic heart. Good luck to you both.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-06-08 04:38 AM

Wish you the very best and this is a wonderful piece of writing!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-06-08 05:15 AM

Interesting...but these experiences can change our feelings...so if he's smart he'll make up his mind...James

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