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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-06-07 01:02 PM

You think I'm paranoid?
I see you looking at me like that
I feel the empty void
Talk to me, not behind my back

What is going on?
Is it satisfaction you achieve?
I'm a girl without feelings
Is that what you believe?

You arms made me feel so safe
Now they just push me away
They used to open to protect me
Now they fold to reject me

No, I am not paranoid
I see how loves dies
I'm disturbed by a boy
With deceitful eyes

My eyes can now reflect
on you apparent inner flaws
That I should've inspected
Guard down brought the unexpected

I must wisen up, choose carefully
In a wide selection of men
Only that ONE will care for me
The others will break my heart again

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (06-07-2002 01:05 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-06-07 01:58 PM

You've done a good job of portraying the betrayed heart.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

2 posted 2002-06-07 02:10 PM

Only if you let them.

Admiring you at Passions.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-07 06:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I know just how you feel, I too want to love someone who is beautiful and has a loving golden heart, and you fit that description so much to me! (kisses) This is soooooo heartfelt, sweet friend, know I will always love you, for you are the girl of my dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-06-07 09:23 PM

Beautifully expressed, Joanna...
but remember, no one can take advantage of you without your permission.

~ understanding hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-06-07 09:26 PM

RosePetal
Wise words and a good write.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2002-06-07 09:39 PM

Only that one will care for you
Indeed this much is true
Don't seal your heart from others though
Just love them nice and slow

Excellent write Joanna! *hugs* Been there, done that, as you know.

A broken heart may hurt me, but a broken heart won't kill me.

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