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Robert94v6
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since 2002-05-29
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0 posted 2002-06-06 11:51 PM



As I left your house tonight I felt like I was walking on my heart
Because now we are apart
I was comforted by the look in your eyes when you told me you loved me
I was overwhelmed by the sincerity of your wish to marry me
When I see you smile my heart skips a beat
When my lips touch yours I feel as close to heaven as I will ever be
As I sit here and listen to country music
You are present in my thoughts like you were yesterday and as you will be tommorow
I have come to discover
That there is no getting over you
There is only wait
For I love you like no one ever will
And I know you will come back to me
Because a lover is a gift
Something to share
A magical spark that lights a fire in your heart
Something that to have you must sometimes walk away from
But when the day arrives
And I ask you to be mine
You will say yes
And forever will we share the magical experience
That I call love

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EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
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1 posted 2002-06-07 12:38 PM


May you experience a lifetime of true love.  This is well expressed.
ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-07 04:42 AM


Robert
You've got it bad and it sounds like it's so nice!
Love is a wonderful thing, all consuming and making one's heart complete.
Nice write....walking on your heart even.....nice!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-06-07 05:19 AM


Very nice writing...that magical experience that we all call love...James
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