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John Yaws
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0 posted 2002-06-06 10:44 PM



The Travelers Tale 57

Ah, 'tis a bonnie sight indeed-
To tread me 'ighland 'eath.
Wi' Scottish sun upon me back,
An' Scottish sod beneath!

To 'ear the skirl o' pipes a'comin-
Fra' same 'ighland fling...
Wi' notes wha sound o' battles...
I can almost 'ear steel ring.

A mort o' years behind me now-
I've fought in foreign wars...
Wi' nought but gray wi'in me locks
To show, aye, an' the scars.

I've 'eard death rattles fra me mates-
As parapets we'd scale...
To die for gold, an' Scottish pride..
So goes the Traveler's Tale.

© Copyright 2002 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
bags123
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since 2002-06-06
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1 posted 2002-06-06 10:59 PM


Hi gunner,
Rare occurance nowadays "A Warriors Ballad"
Loved the rhythm/rhyme scheme, Loved the Scottish Brogue. I'm an Irishman myself born of the same stock as you Scots/Gael if you go back far enough. Will be posting something similar in the days ahead from Erin's point of view. I enjoyed.  

Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 2002-06-09 12:40 PM


This was a neat read, I really enjoyed how you wrote this. A great tale you have told through this poem also. Thanks for sharing with us here
Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-06-09 09:56 PM



You do these so very well, you leave your accent along the boards and in the reader's ear...these poems make for some reading...

more, please!

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