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Open Poetry #20

state of mind

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

0 posted 2002-06-06 08:35 PM

state of mind

A state of mind:
all very neat and nice.

Sounds easy enough.
So why not give it a try?

Okay.
Today
I will point all my dendrites
north.

What say?

copyright 2002

[This message has been edited by mirror man (06-06-2002 09:26 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
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1 posted 2002-06-06 09:54 PM

mirror man

Not sure what is north of you...but, go for it.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-06-07 04:40 PM

I'm wondering if the magnetic forces will drive me colder. . .

this is perfect. . .just obscure enough to drive people to think. . . well done. . .

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mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

3 posted 2002-06-07 11:58 PM

Martie -- north is all frosty cool and white. Thank you.

Sven -- thank you. Yes, I originally meant it to do that, but I am thinking now it's just too obscure.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (06-08-2002 12:38 AM).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-06-09 05:03 AM

Aw it's obscure alright but it stimulates! I like it!

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