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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-06-06 05:57 PM




The black cloak of goodness
drapes the shoulders
of many smiling faces
covers a multitude of deeds
good or bad~
or whatever your perception
in this permissible land of gray
buy a black book of rules to
match
on sale by the masses,
or  write your own to
follow faithfully down the
broad road of differing ideas
& choices
who could know what truly
lies beneath such a device
as the black cloak of goodness?
whether or not it's love
or hate
life or death?
honorability or none?
the possibilities are endless...

or are they?

~R.T.
6/02


"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (06-06-2002 05:59 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-06 07:33 PM


Such a mysterious and mystical piece of
poetry...leaving much to be thought and
pondered...You wrote it well for the
title fits perfectly!

EarthenSoul
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2 posted 2002-06-06 07:45 PM


Absolutely intriguing.  Very well written.
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3 posted 2002-06-06 08:19 PM




(sigh) This is a powerfully mysterious and somewhat haunting poem, sweet friend, it may be an unknown realm indeed but whatever rests beneath it is something I know we can have the heart to accept on! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-06-2002 08:19 PM).]

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