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Deaths Dismal Features
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I still fear death's dismal features horned and taloned horrid creatures who so blithely and compliant make a man to aquiesce I just hope life's worth the dying and that Jesus wasn't lying about mansions up in heaven golden gates to welcome me. I've been tempted by loose ladies prefer not to live in Hades but from time to time partaken of an apple from the tree It's a question so perplexing Why does God condemn the sexing when some young thing has worked so hard to share her skills for free? So friends... can you adjure for me explain this unfair policy? Why is paradise the carrott but we never eat the pie? Please forgive this introspection I still hope for resurrection all these answers without questions leave me crippled anyway. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If you're crippled, you're not alone. *S* For I think questions seep into the thoughts of even those with greatest faith... A child drives the parents nuts with cries of "Why?"... and we never stop wondering. *G* Well done, bags... glad you joined us! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Suthern, Thanks for reading this little ditty. Will look up yours soon for comments. Peace |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bags, it's going to be fun watching you post two or three poems through a day or evening...I'm sure with your thought process, you are going to find a wonderful readership, just as there is plenty of reading to be done by us, for us all... again, Welcome! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thank you Sunshine. I'm looking for a good time. Poetically speaking that is! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And then God created a woman...it would be hard to create a more potent temptation...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lot's of questions here Bags.......answers are only available to you through your own small voice! Welcome! Watch out! These days the apples are falling right off the trees.......It just might hurt! |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks guys. These day's I wear a helmut to avoid all those falling apples. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Heh... enjoyed, again...will be looking out for more - I like your style of writing..  K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
bags, love your style! Enjoy yourself and have a look around. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so sad but soooooo powerful, sweet friend, it too is a mystery to me but I believe He would never tell a lie and if we have the heart to believe we will find true joy up to that time! (sigh) You are already a wonderful addition to this community, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Thanks everyone for warm welcome. I have been posting on another site for about 4 months now. Seems like I found a 2nd home. I'll be back tommorrow to check out your works. GoodNight sleep tight, don't let the Nah... nevermind, let them do their damndest! |
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