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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-06 04:49 PM



Between The Lines


WORDS
from your pen
FLOW
to my heart
TOUCHING
undiscovered wings
PLACES
of my need



"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

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1 posted 2002-06-06 06:56 PM


Helen darling girl this is exquisite writing and you’ve proved yet again how great a writer you are. Utterly beautiful writing, do you ever do anything less than beauty, no darling girl you don’t, wonderful This is utterly gorgeous I love it darling heart



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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2 posted 2002-06-06 07:59 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is such a short but sweet wonderful gem, sweet friend, I love it and I know everyone like Larry will too! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EarthenSoul
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3 posted 2002-06-06 08:05 PM


WORDS FLOW - TOUCHING PLACES
I absolutely love this!

MidnightSon
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between the gutter & the stars
4 posted 2002-06-06 08:12 PM


stunning!
this i could read a hundred times and always find a new way to do it, a new way to interpret it...
brilliant write.

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-06-06 09:14 PM


Loved reading between the lines Helen.
Wonderful words...
~Hugs~

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