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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-06-06 03:36 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-06 03:39 PM



THIS is when you are at your best
when leaving stories of the test
when knowing east is knowing west,
yes, this is when you're at your best...

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2 posted 2002-06-06 03:40 PM


Wow!
Marge!
Do I ever like the way you've laid out this beautiful poem from your native heart!
The graphics fit the words perfectly.
Write on forever White Feather!

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3 posted 2002-06-06 03:56 PM


You've left me without words... but I know you hear my heart... This is stunning. *S*
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4 posted 2002-06-06 04:01 PM


Marge:  This is so eloquent! Expressive of the deep emotions you have for your heritage.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-06-06 04:10 PM


Friends~
This morning I got up before the sun ... took my cup of coffee and went to sit the quiet of the morn~
From the woods they came ... Spirits of the ancient voices ...
telling me ..... compelling me ... to write their song~

I'm very blessed by the *gift* of the voices~

SuthernGal .... yes !

Thank you everyone~
This one feels soooooooooo good~
It shows me that the Ancient Spirits have made the pilgrimage with me to my new home~
I am sooooooooo happy~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-06 06:45 PM


Marge,
You never cease to please. Enjoyed

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7 posted 2002-06-06 06:45 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister this was spectacular, you have such power in your words, never do you fail to inject atmosphere into your writing not many can do that even half so well. YOU always do, you write the scene, you recreate it within the mind of the reader, Are you good, is this divine, well, only if you need air to breathe it is. I can see exactly what you are saying I could read it a million times and it would still make me misty eyed with delight.

Absolutely superb writing I love it utterly utterly love it Thank you for this wonder


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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8 posted 2002-06-06 06:48 PM


Marge

You listen well...and you pass on the words..thank you for that!  I'm sure that was how it was meant to be.  Hugs!

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9 posted 2002-06-06 07:36 PM


Marge...I have always been fascinated by
the native lore....Very much enjoyed this
poem...Yes, you listen very well..

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10 posted 2002-06-06 08:00 PM


I am soooo happy to see the writings of your ancient ancestors again. This is just spectacular and has again left me breathless and near tears.

'Where Spirits of my people walk, seeking peace...forevermore.' Oh how heartbroken they must be to see the messes we have gotten into and the destruction of their beautiful land.  Love ya, Marti  

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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11 posted 2002-06-07 02:38 PM


Back to add this to my library. *S* And before you wonder... that was AWE making me forgetful, not blonde. *G*
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12 posted 2002-06-07 02:40 PM


I am glad they made the journey with you Marge, you are blessed in their spirits....Hugs

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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13 posted 2002-06-07 03:36 PM


Marge...this poem is absolutely beautiful, but I must admit, I found it difficult to read on my screen in its presentation.
Nan
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14 posted 2002-06-07 10:54 PM


Forevermore indeed... This is wonderful...
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15 posted 2002-06-07 11:19 PM


Such pride and strength in this work...my favorite so far. ThisDiamond
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-06-08 04:30 PM


Seymour~
It's a true pleasure to 'enjoy' with you~

MarshaLove~
You're a sweetheart of the Nth degree ~

MartieSis~
I sure try, sweetie~
They come so peacefully to the open spirit of my heart~

Magnus~
The legends are meant to be shared ...
it has been said to me that is my mission in life to try to do so ...~
Thank you dear poet~

Marti~
Yes, my friend ... the Spirits are walking in the creek beds of tears shed~
When the Rainbow Warriors come ... they will bring peace for all who are ready~
I 'listen' until they come~

SuthernGal~
Yes, my friend ... I do know you soooooo well, just as you know me~
(LOL ... and we're both a little 'blonde' at times)

GentleSpirit~
Thank you ... indeed I feel blessed with the visions they bring~

Hootie~
Thanks gal ... sorry 'bout your monitor .. some minor adjustments to your settings should make it okay~

Nanners~
I'm soooooo glad you like it~
Honest Injun !

ThisDiamond~
Why, thanks so much~
*Hugs8
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-06-08 05:59 PM


This is gorgeous, Marge...and so artistically done too!

~ hallowed hugs


Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-08-2002 06:00 PM).]

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-06-08 11:01 PM


Lyra~
Thank you sweet gentle lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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