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Iambe Watches

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Decaflame
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0 posted 06-06-2002 01:08 PM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Decaflame


Iambe Watches

She joined our picnic
while he
simmered my summer sun

when he found blades of grass
to tickle my fancy
then more

my soft slap turned to tug
and grimace turned
tickle,
then grinning lightly
"do it again"
a whispered request,

"do it again,
so I might punish
you into forgetting
where you left
the blade”

he complied, and plied,

winding ways and
bending curves
taking us both to places
long unexplored
as grander canyon dreams
even Rod could not
imagine
became his
and mine

Iambe winked,
blinked,
her mouth an O
for what she had missed
as well...

the only ants
I found on the pick nicked
ground
where those under my skin
where he had kissed
my summer warm
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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 06-06-2002 01:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms Deca
bet Rod would grin
and slap a wink at ya
this was somewhere special cool
Bridget Shenachie
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2 posted 06-06-2002 01:27 PM       View Profile for Bridget Shenachie   Email Bridget Shenachie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bridget Shenachie

Enjoyed your gentle rendering of 'slap and tickle'.  Blush!

Shenachie
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 06-06-2002 02:49 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Deca!  My my lady..I know someone who
is going to really enjoy this one besides me!
Oooh how you made me smile today.
Just when I needed it most!
~Hugs~
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Decaflame
Big smile, enjoyed.
ethome
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Deca
You got another ear to ear right here!
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Deep in the heart


6 posted 06-06-2002 04:13 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I'm sure Ron will be pleased to see such a wonderful work about his poetic protagonist.
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ah yes. . . but, who's watching Iambe??  

wonderful Decaflame. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Severn
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Wunnerful flow lady...

this works, and it works well...muchly enjoyed..

K
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Excuse me while I go get the hose to cool off
myself and my monitor screen....Seems we
both got a little warm...

Thank You....
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She keeps leaving Oklahoma. Sheesh.
 
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