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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-06-06 09:05 AM



                lingering fragrance
            swirling enticing tendrils
              light touch of longing

[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-06-2002 09:07 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-06 09:07 AM


Magnus,
Very good I enjoyed.

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2 posted 2002-06-06 09:08 AM



Chanel channeling
scenting senses so sweetly
what is there to touch

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3 posted 2002-06-06 09:08 AM


And would that fragrance happen to be White Shoulders?
Good morning to you Barry, and this lovely thought.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-06-06 09:09 AM


Thanx Sy,....Now I need to go see what
little tidbit you have given us..
Good Morning!

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5 posted 2002-06-06 09:11 AM


Good Morning Sun....
Ummm,  I might like that one too...
Good Morning Nancy...
YOU KNOW I do love White Shoulders...

You girls send me a scent or two  and I
will be in heaven!


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6 posted 2002-06-06 12:18 PM


seductive little perfume cloud
I can close my eyes
to read this

~NIK~

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7 posted 2002-06-06 01:58 PM


These words equal a caress.

lovely,
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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8 posted 2002-06-06 04:08 PM


Right on Magnus!   I can't add a thing!
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9 posted 2002-06-06 07:18 PM


Magnus darling boy, this is exquisite darling boy utterly utterly exquisite. So soft yet tickles the senses with an elussive fragrance of misty heat.

I love this darling as always whichever style you write in it suits you and this is truly gorgeous.

Now can I tempt you to me with a faint trace of essence of moi? I know, no I can’t, but if I could ……….. ahhhhhhhh what a delightful fragrance that would be


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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10 posted 2002-06-06 07:24 PM


Your words, I can smell.
Beautiful!

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11 posted 2002-06-06 08:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you write such wonderful senryus, I'd love to see many more of those from you for you truly possess a knack at them! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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