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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-06-06 08:46 AM


Filled With You
~*~
Memories like rainwater
needing a place to rest
brushing away cobwebs
climbing the creaking stairway
to my mind
opening the cold door to my past
with trembling heart in hand
feeling your presence once more
like the morning dew that quiets the rose
I’m filled with you

BloomingRose


© Copyright 2002 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-06 08:50 AM


BloomingRose
Not hard to understand, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-06 09:02 PM




(sigh) Such a soft tranquility fills these comforting words, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-06-06 09:50 PM


Hello Blooming Rose

This was simply lovely.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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4 posted 2002-06-06 10:11 PM


This poem is filled with inner peace and contentment.....nice
ctowen
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5 posted 2002-06-06 10:44 PM


I could hear the trickle of your soul .... quite lovely!!
An excellent write.

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6 posted 2002-06-07 04:38 PM


and in being filled. . . we find life. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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7 posted 2002-06-07 06:08 PM


liked it a lot
BloomingRose
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8 posted 2002-06-07 06:44 PM


Thank you sweet friends.
Deb

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