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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-06-06 07:42 AM


Seem them there,
So pretty arranged with care,
White and blue,
Yellow too,
Fragrance light it scents the air,
On the sill,
Window fill,
Blossoms of spring now inside,
Sweet to eyes
No disguise
To the view of wall it hides,
Splash color
Where all other is pallor.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-06-06 10:50 AM


Professor

Flowers do take the gloom from room.  They also have healing power and are artists...they paint smiles on people.  Thanks!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-06-06 10:54 AM


Professor Gloom
I wouldn't call that a gloomy view, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2002-06-06 09:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love flowers so so much and they always make me smile when they bloom every spring and summer for me! (big hugggssssss) This is a beautiful remedy of words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-06-07 01:13 PM


I love flowers....
beautiful picture you created....
Connie

EarthenSoul
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5 posted 2002-06-07 01:32 PM


This is wonderful.  I can smell the sweet fragrance of your words.
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6 posted 2002-06-07 02:42 PM


A very pleasingly scented poem, Gloom. An enjoyable read.
Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2002-06-07 03:09 PM


Thanks for brightening my day!  Enjoyed.

Shenachie

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8 posted 2002-06-07 03:26 PM


Applauding!!! Ah, the splash of color that otherwise hides our dull existance sometimes. Wonderful work PG...you've colored my day here
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