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In Any Language ( For Larry And His Daughter)

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Saunni
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0 posted 06-05-2002 07:20 PM       View Profile for Saunni   Email Saunni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Saunni


Larry, I am sorry it's taking me this long to write something. Sometimes, when things are so emotional, I have to step back awhile or I am consumed with the grief, or whatever the feeling, as well. I hope you like this. This isn't my best but says what I want to say and was trying to show that without taking so long. You can find her in nature. Like with my daughter, she did not pass away, but is gone and nature brought her a little closer to me.

In Any Language

Some say sacred comes from just the physical
I believe it comes from moments that's touched you inside
Don't allow this grief to be anymore then the loss you endured
Simply don't let it tug towards that forever good-bye...

Allow the waters that run down your so kind face
To be the memories of the both you together
In any language both sadness and happiness can be found
When you find your reality and its forever...

That love of her can plague you from just about anything
Let her heart be what wakes you through that sunrise
And, remember, just remember, sweet Friend
The rising sun can never die...

So, you can grasp at what used to be
Engraved dearly within your walk left in life
Allow her sun to guide you though all tomorrow's
And, on into the deepest of night...

In any language she's heard and seen through the eyes
And, once sadness eases you'll find her the same
You can call on her beneath deep blue black skies
And, she'll shield you from all this pouring rain...

Her language of sincere will haunt you as she says to hang on
And, her language of salvation will linger through  your years
So, remember she's with you in any language if you look
And, will stroll just the same down your cheeks with those tears...

I can assure your memories will last through all weather we have
And, in any language, you can have her back
Your fall to the knees in plead of what once was
Will just remind you of her undying love....

Her voice of stillness you'll witness in those evenings
And, the gentleness to the soul so very pleasing
In any language she'll find you and show you're not alone
And, in any language, together, you can embrace your new home...


Sauni   The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

[This message has been edited by Saunni (06-05-2002 07:35 PM).]

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(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You sweet Saunni, we all understand and it is never too late to show your loving heart, I understand how sometimes we are at a loss of words and it takes time to think it over! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) We will always remember Ginger, for her love is in every language and her love is so true and nothing can ever change that between Ginger and Larry and us all! You are a true angel, sweet friend, we're all so blessed to have you as a true friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 06-05-2002 07:32 PM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

'That love of her can plague you from just about anything
Let her heart be what wakes you through that sunrise
And, remember, just remember, sweet Friend
The rising sun can never die...'
...Beautiful words from a beautiful poet; emotions are brimming out of this poem - I hope whatever inspired the peom is not causing you too much pain...
A poet in pain,
will search in vain,
for things they need,
But may never gain .
... remember happiness is in your soul; you just have to look deep behind the pain .
Great poem .
L.of.L. Tom .
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3 posted 06-05-2002 07:35 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Saunni, I do believe this is a Keeper.  Not only have you touched on one person's grief, and allowed a sense of hope to permeate him this point forward, so have you written a universal poem, one that can be given to anyone, anytime, for most any deep loss...

You, my dear, have done a great service, and I am very proud to call you Poet...
Larry C
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4 posted 06-09-2002 01:51 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Saunni,
I had indeed missed this. I'm so pleased you let me know it is here.

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Her voice of stillness you'll witness in those evenings
And, the gentleness to the soul so very pleasing
In any language she'll find you and show you're not alone
And, in any language, together, you can embrace your new home...
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You know I adore every verse, I'd pick them all. So much comfort packed into this wonderful poem. It will be your best in my heart always. How kind and how touching. I will always cherish this dear friend. From the bottom of my heart know your timing is perfect.
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5 posted 06-09-2002 01:58 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Saunni, this is such a beautifully written poem of compassion and understanding. Your words reveal an amazingly wonderful heart and soul. Thank you, for writing and sharing this poem, and your heart.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 06-09-2002 05:05 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely words of comfort from your heart Saunni...James
ethome
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7 posted 06-09-2002 05:10 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Saunni
This is an expression of deep compassion for your fellow poet friend. The loving insight in this work is so warm and comforting. You are to be commended!
Larry C
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8 posted 05-18-2004 09:58 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Saunni,
Time...it is a lovely thing. I'm glad you took yours.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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