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0 posted 2002-06-04 11:37 PM


I search for your smile in the ocean
Your name I still do not know
But I feel you right here beside me
Beneath the bright moon’s glow

To others you are a mystery
But I know you are always there
You held my hand just this evening
When I cried about how life is unfair

I have felt your arms gently lift me
From harms way just in time
Yet you never have let me thank you
So I do so now with this rhyme

I felt your presence when he was drinking
And I swore I couldn’t go on
I somehow awoke cheerily in the morning
Grateful to greet the new dawn

And when I made this trek so far from home
Your strength kept me from being afraid
It was with you right beside me
In the faces of new friends I made

So I suppose some would call you an angel
I simply call you my friend
And watch for your face in the moonlight
Then close my eyes and let the words end.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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1 posted 2002-06-04 11:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and just the thought of having a true friend is such a lovely feeling even when they not seem angelic! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, may you always feel comfort near those you love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michelle,, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Gaia
2 posted 2002-06-04 11:51 PM


Your gratitiude has now been spoken. Well done. Keep smiling, and write more, please!
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