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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-04 10:20 PM

In dark of night no angel's wing,
Can pierce the veil of evil's bring,
Within man's soul lays silent scream,
No way to halt, to wake hell's dream.
As mocked by shadows of the night,
Feels deep the lance of sin's cruel bite,
Shrouded chambers of haunting sorrow,
Rent asunder by tempest's woe,
With mournful heart and quivering limb,
Into deep chasms black and grim,
Man walks in paths of trackless stead,
Into night's canyons of spiteful dread,
'Til darkness fades, then numbed to pain,
Man waits once more for dark again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-04 10:25 PM

Tim.
considered me
rendered
quiet.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-06-05 10:00 PM

The intensity of your verse permeates every word, m'friend.... This is a truly awesome piece. You're REALLY good, ya know??..

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-06-05 10:21 PM

This piece so well written and powerful. The profound display of the alter ego...for man is an innocent creature, meant to be loved.
Great! ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-05 11:05 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Tim, this is soooooo striking, sweet friend, I believe deep down all man is innocent and while it saddens me to see many men face the dark side of life that there is a beauty that is just longing to be seen underneath it all! (sigh) This is a powerful sonnet, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2002-06-05 11:30 PM

i'm going to start a publishing company soon..... within the next year...

i want to publish this piece

would that be ok?

this is wonderful!!

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