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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-04 09:30 PM



Touching
~*Marge Tindal*~

In reaching out ~ we reach within
Inspire of another ~ stirs our pen
Lovely words written ~ in heartfelt desire
Fills another ~ with poetic inspire



*Thanks to the many, many poets who have moved me
to reach beyond my little corner of the word-world
and catch a thought of inspiration~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-04 09:38 PM



I would say you are welcome, except, I would have written this, just for you...

Martie
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2 posted 2002-06-04 09:40 PM


Marge my sis...so true!
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3 posted 2002-06-04 09:41 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is as soft as a child’s sigh, I love this poem. This is awesome and so beautifully written I’m stunned you make it look easy when I know it’s not. You are truly an inspirational writer do I love this? YOU know I do it’s superb. Utterly utterly wonderful

The beauty of these words are reflected in your poetic eye how could anyone fail to enjoy the beauty of this wonder. Wonderful writing darling heart as always, YOU always pen the most amazing delightful heart songs and soul’s sighs. I love it utterly utterly

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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4 posted 2002-06-04 09:55 PM


Very lovely, Marge....

I love the economy of words.  Sometimes we can say so much with so few words...as you have done here.

~ many hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-06-04 09:59 PM


Marge, I always enjoy reading what you write. I enjoyed this one too. Thank you Dear Friend.
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2002-06-04 10:01 PM


The first line is wonderful !!!
It is so true
Loved this
Liz

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7 posted 2002-06-04 10:28 PM


Simple and sweet are the revelations and profound thoughts of the poet. I really like this Marge. ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2002-06-04 10:39 PM


Marge,
I would say so.

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9 posted 2002-06-04 11:19 PM


Marge:  Lovely lines and what you say is true for all of us I'm sure.  We find so much inspiration from one another.

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-06-04 11:45 PM


Ditto! You do so inspire!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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11 posted 2002-06-05 11:00 AM


I always find you very inspirational.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-06-05 11:20 AM


Marge~

what a blessing you are to these blue pages....and an inspiration to all that read your lovely words..... Thank you...


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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13 posted 2002-06-05 04:39 PM


This diamond shines in your collection of poetic gems. *S* And we owe thanks to your inspirations... for you never fail to touch us. *S*
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14 posted 2002-06-05 04:50 PM


Uh-huh ... yep ... shore ... right on ... yup ... si' ... oui ... ja ... hai ... ching ching ... indubitably

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15 posted 2002-06-05 05:04 PM


Very nice Marge...James
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16 posted 2002-06-05 05:54 PM


ah right to the point, love the way you share your thoughts.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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