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Alone In Scarlet
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Alone In Scarlet |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A page of heart and sinful love upon the book of God in write The lust of both which cannot be within the dim of flickers light Beneath the rig of sail on blue in stormy winds of gusts in gale A woman comes before the man in purchase of one house in sale A man of God and white of cloth in stumble falls before the maid when swam the pond in bare of skin where all the sight of him displayed In dreams of each the lust of fire became the quest of sinful souls where moments sought in dreams of night were cast to scarlet letters bold Two hearts in beat of sordid chase for love bidden to be not known A sin of two in passion’s haste In scarlet dress of walk alone [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-04-2002 08:34 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't stop... don't ever stop... more, please... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
More...she said in shudders nigh as her soul departs the sigh More Sire, doth thee not know tis thine words, thee must sow Tis the wine of flowers bloom and the heart of treasure keep Tis the vines of lover's swoon in the search of passion's deep Tis the mome of ever and more naught the night of nevermore 'Pon the ears of the one maid comes to wish mine all displayed YES....more... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy again this had fallen far too far down the page for such wonderful writing. Always your words are special and this particular style of yours is exceptional, it literally flows into my soul like life itself. Your words travel through the places of my soul that hark to the wind and then feel the sunlight stroking heat within. This is exquisite writing, don’t stop please darling boy, your writing is especially superb. I love it utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, you know you are just simply a dear. And I do so love your replies....UTTERLY! Thanx darling girl... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Two hearts in beat of sordid chase for love bidden to be not known A sin of two in passion’s haste In scarlet dress of walk alone I love the scarlet passion here, Barry... Wonderful!  ~ scarlet hugsLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello my friend. I read this a few ways tonight...it struck me as the casual relationship so popular in the single crowd, it struck me as the recent stories of the clergy and all their difficult choices...it struck me that all too often what is believed to be love is simply lust and in the discovery of that, the candle dims... Thoughtful write. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo wonderfully passionate, sweet friend, you always bring such fire and color of inspiration to us all! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy....I wanted to answer your reply first. I watched a part of the movie Scarlet Letter last night. This is my 20 lines or less recap. poetically of what I saw within the movie (with Demi Moore as the lead actress) It was what I wrote of...Nothing moral or ethical about the poem as written...Just my poetic way of painting it... She came to America, having left her husband behind.... Ended up having an affair with the Preacher.... This was of their lust and the sins of their passions... Thanx. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Lady Lyra...I have never seen all of the Movie, nor have I read the book..but I might... Noah my friend...thanx for your warmth... |
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