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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-06-04 04:56 PM


Population You And Me

I believe I've carried you throughout my eternally grateful heart
I know you've dined lastingly through it all
Allow us a different path to venture through today
Where many rainbows of awe softly fall...

Lets take what nature lends us and dwell in it's space
Where lonely robins speak utterly pure
Sway to their notion of peace in motion
Where so much fulfillment is stored...

Allow to surround us the collection of satisfaction in pairs
Where wildflowers group to perform in the fields
They'll lean with the winds never too strong to give in
While the sun applauds them with rays for the dance they revealed...

Can't you just breathe in inspiration to the rest of this place
For, there's mountains of volume too high to reach the end
Greens linger in shades of fluorescent to capture our soul
And, crowds us outnumbered by numerous leaf like friends...

It's the bondage of the hills that keep solitude inside
And, gives us free will to absorb what lies here within
Just picture the gifts we're given embraced by the greens
I'm so persuaded to bring us here once again...

Lets seek release in those waters that have a slight shade of violet
Wade knee high in its flow across our bodies at last
And, reach effortlessly across the rain's fill to the earth
And, touch buds of berries and their spray as we pass...

On land bodies resting with eyes glued to the skies
Moonbeams spread along the midnight air
And, in distance the planes and their destination in mind
Gives us assurance we're the only ones there...

The stars as our blanket and Mr. Moon as our light
Owls call the wild while we listen on into the night
This change from the rain to an effort to set us both free
Here in the middle of no where population you and me...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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1 posted 2002-06-04 05:20 PM



...Owls call the wild while we listen on into the night...

I like this line!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-04 10:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Saunni, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the thought of staring up at the skies under the stars and finding so much more magic with the one you love! (kiss on cheek) This is magical, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-06-05 01:59 AM


"It's the bondage of the hills that keep solitude inside
And, gives us free will to absorb what lies here within"


I love that thought. You always bring nature up close, and personal. Peaceful hugs, Saunni.

Sven
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4 posted 2002-06-05 04:51 PM


this is excellent. . . you make it so real. . .

well done. . .

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