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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-04 07:08 AM


Hawaiian Fun

Waikiki Beach is a place
where surfers play.
One good ride
could make their day.

Surfer's riding boards
standing proud and tall
Some will have a good ride
and some will fall.

Gorgeous women
come into my view.
A string bikini
lures my eyes to you.

What a fine beach day.
Side by side in the sun we lay.
As I admire you in the setting sun
I realize Hawaiian fun
has only just begun.

JamesLee
June04
2002

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2002-06-04 07:10 AM


Oh boy ... now I'm wanting a vacation James!  Thanks for taking me there briefly, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2002-06-04 10:14 AM




YAY!!! Oh James, this sounds like so much fun, sweet friend, I want a vacation now now now! (smiles) Hawaii is such a magical plsace to me, sweet friend, this is a spellbinding beautiful poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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