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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 06-04-2002 12:26 AM       View Profile for GOlDsparklESS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GOlDsparklESS

sometimes

love is like the moon
contemplating
and wholly dependent on the sun
a reflection of passion
in all its blazen glory

i 'm striving
too imploring
to find the truth in a haze

i'm discerning
a searcher
and i found you
words of love fall on deaf ears
impervious soldier

infuriating and endearing

so profound!
morose
cynical
misanthropical glumfully gleeful bastard

i'm swept away!

intensified
tumbleweed

the truth is relentless!

honorable
proud integrity

noble indeed   (remember the stars)
with delicacy thrown in there

there's only one way out

(choose love!)

i'm obvious

oblivious

oblivion
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Midnitesun
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1 posted 06-04-2002 01:36 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

"i'm striving
too imploring
to find the truth in a haze"

Maybe relax, stop searching, and let it just find you? I enjoyed the read. Peace.
MIdsummerRain
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2 posted 06-04-2002 02:09 AM       View Profile for MIdsummerRain   Email MIdsummerRain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MIdsummerRain

"...love is like the moon
contemplating
and wholly dependent on the sun..."

I loved the hidden truths in this write, as well as the style in which you presented it ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

GOlDsparklESS
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3 posted 06-11-2002 10:23 PM       View Profile for GOlDsparklESS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOlDsparklESS

yyyyeah...just reminding people to think....ya know... thinking can be a great thing....

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GOlDsparklESS
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4 posted 11-14-2002 12:26 PM       View Profile for GOlDsparklESS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOlDsparklESS

HAHAHAHA- this was inspired by JOE KNOB.  
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good ending...I love endings!
 
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