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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
sometimes love is like the moon contemplating and wholly dependent on the sun a reflection of passion in all its blazen glory i 'm striving too imploring to find the truth in a haze i'm discerning a searcher and i found you words of love fall on deaf ears impervious soldier infuriating and endearing so profound! morose cynical misanthropical glumfully gleeful bastard i'm swept away! intensified tumbleweed the truth is relentless! honorable proud integrity noble indeed (remember the stars) with delicacy thrown in there there's only one way out (choose love!) i'm obvious oblivious oblivion |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"i'm striving too imploring to find the truth in a haze" Maybe relax, stop searching, and let it just find you? I enjoyed the read. Peace. |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...love is like the moon contemplating and wholly dependent on the sun..." I loved the hidden truths in this write, as well as the style in which you presented it ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
yyyyeah...just reminding people to think....ya know... thinking can be a great thing.... [This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (06-13-2002 04:20 PM).] |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
HAHAHAHA- this was inspired by JOE KNOB. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good ending...I love endings! |
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