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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-06-03 11:40 PM



Aimlessly Walking

For off the assembly line we're not handed happiness
We're never given self worth to carry at our sides
It has to come from where you can create it
I've been every emotion and it's heart touching ride...

When inside myself I master the creation of creation
I'm taken where no one else has ever been in time
And, I find him, play the roll of what's really going on
And, sip sincerity at it's best in my mind...

The only one not to really touch me has touched me
Far more in expression then a comet in flight
Forgive me, if I go aimlessly walking in my head
And, preserve him with all of my might...

Here, even simple nature like features rest all the same
A call to the wild where home then resides
With him in the distance of my minds eye there
He assures my fall, to his arms, always wide...

I go aimlessly walking to catch a glimpse of my angel
Miles very real when the wind doesn't blow my way
Here, lightening can strike and I don't flinch to it's streak
And, blue, it survives but in it's lightest shade...

Stones in this place never appear heavy as in real life
And, daffodils sing when their tips grace the ends of your feet
Walking, still, I find myself on the lap of content
Roaming frantically calm on golden streets...

Their lit with lights in tints of turquoise like the sea
A little added heaven to the difference in my walk ahead
And, aimlessly, I stroll hand in hand beneath gentle moons
And, blades of grass bow to a breeze, knee high, on natures bed...

Other life in glitter like forms float to the rhythm of my heart
Appear the instant I aimlessly walk through this place
And, together, we find an absolute peace being among them
Just sharing the delight of gratefulness' face...

All I have is what I can hold here in my minds moment so bright
God he sure looks so good in this kind of light
I go aimlessly walking when his presence is anywhere but near
And, just when I've fallen my hardest my walk brings him here...

To the unbelievable, unthinkable, and uncontrollable sometimes
It feels good to wander and never fear any boundary lines
Blessed is me when I'm there he's as warm as the sun
When, at times, my aimlessly walk to him builds the urge to run...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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1 posted 2002-06-03 11:46 PM


It may be aimless walking but it's not aimless writing....this is excellent, miss
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2 posted 2002-06-04 01:12 AM


*sitting here with mouth dropped open*

um.....well...yes, all I can say is I agree, yes (and am overwhelmed by the words here)

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3 posted 2002-06-04 11:07 AM


"All I have is what I can hold here in my minds moment so bright
God he sure looks so good in this kind of light
I go aimlessly walking when his presence is anywhere but near
And, just when I've fallen my hardest my walk brings him here...

To the unbelievable, unthinkable, and uncontrollable sometimes
It feels good to wander and never fear any boundary lines
Blessed is me when I'm there he's as warm as the sun
When, at times, my aimlessly walk to him builds the urge to run..."




(smiles) Oh Saunni, you always write the most spiritually wonderful words, sweet friend, we may all be walking aimlessly but there are no barbed-wires or boundary lines that can seperate us from Him for He is like the compass rose of all our hearts, helping us find our way when we don't even realize it! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-04 12:53 PM


Saunni,
Yr aimlessness
has deadly accuracy.

Mike

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